I am not good at poetry. However, last semester, we had to write a freeverse poem and a formal poem. I thought I would post my formal one for feedback. I’ve always wanted to get better at poetry. So let me know what you think and I’ll post the other one soon!
What if we’re not all that different?
Yet we stay so ignorant
What if people didn’t die?
Yet we always say goodbye
What if animals rule?
And we’re just fools
What if money is useless?
But we’re all just ruthless?
What if life is a bunch of dreams?
What if nothing is as it seems?
What if we don’t belong?
What if everything we know is wrong?